Article 1: 2nd Draft

Taking into account the suggestions that were proposed for this article, I began editing the article.


This was much easier than writing the first draft of the article as all this draft required was more exaggerated opinions.


When I got this article back, all that needed editing was a few minor spelling and grammatical errors. I corrected these, and so now I have the final edition of this article for the magazine.


I will now begin writing the alternative article on tuition fees.